Comments for my client edit

I wanted to show my edit to few students and also my tutor so i can get to know what changes should be made if there are many should be made.

Comments 1 Student : my interviews were to long and it was bit boring to watch same person for so many minutes and listen to there chat about place i was told by this student that i should keep the interview and instead of her picture i should over lay it with an other images from my footage also my start and my end is good i should stick to it.

Danny Kaye comment: same thing as the student i should over lay the interview with few other footage i have because watching an interview can get really boring if its too long. also sort my audio out as it gets to low and to high at some points.

Comment 2 Student: my start is really good i should stick to the idea and also the ending is good but interviews are to long so i should work on that and replace the clip or over lay it with an other footage of the event.

after getting all these comments i went through my footage again and sorted all the problems out again i am still working on my volume etc.

i have change allot of thins from the last edit i have in total i have 12 edits and i have keep changing it but lats night i have made my final edit which is edit 12 and i will stick to that as its really good and also makes sense i will now make an appointment with my client and show them the footage so they can give their opinion i will then try to work around it again if i have enough time.