when i wrote my script i was bit worried to say if i ma giving the right massage out for file sharing or not ,so i got few fiends ad people i did not know got them to Read my script and tell me what should i do make it better and get the massage across the audience.
mistakes i did in my script were :
the way people Read it it was giving out to many massages at the same time without delivering the main massage to our audience.which was (file sharing is illegal)
(1)money worry for student,(2)download them and copy them on a CD(3)sold them(4)i never thought anyone would find out...all this was taking me away from a original massage.where in brief it said i have to make a informative video which simply means educate people and convey the massage.
i sat down thaught about it again and i cut down on all those dialogues and stuck to the topic which was important.
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