script changes

when i wrote my script i was bit worried to say if i ma giving the right massage out for file sharing or not ,so i got few fiends ad people i did not know got them to Read my script and tell me what should i do make it better and get the massage across the audience.
mistakes i did in my script were :
the way people Read it it was giving out to many massages at the same time without delivering the main massage to our audience.which was (file sharing is illegal)
(1)money worry for student,(2)download them and copy them on a CD(3)sold them(4)i never thought anyone would find out...all this was taking me away from a original massage.where in brief it said i have to make a informative video which simply means educate people and convey the massage.

i sat down thaught about it again and i cut down on all those dialogues and stuck to the topic which was important.

Live Client

i am thinking of making my promotional video 10 to 20minutes long because too long video i don't think any1 will be interested in watching it and 10 to 20 i can mostly cover everything i will speak to my client and decide on the timing of the video but most likely it will 30minutes or less.and i am not thinking to make it any longer then that at all.

Live Client meeting

on November the 18Th i had my second meeting with my Live client whom i will be making a promotional add for,Becky met me very nicely and in a very friendly manner i did not feel that she was getting annoyed of me keep asking for meetings as i did have problem with My last client i wanted to work no names mentioned, well this time we both spoke about what her requirements and what is there she wants to do to promote her business well we agreed on few things and we did disagree things too and that was only because of copyright problem other wise I'm pretty sure that would have been a yes too but it happens and i guess you always have to find a way to go around things for u to make it work.meeting lasted for 1hour and we decided on dates when i will see her and discuss the project more and if she has more suggestions and if i can work on the then we will altogether meeting was successful and I'm happy with the outcome so far.

PRP and simulated project

its been over 2 weeks and i been working on my both projects ..i was really happy with my advert for copy right,something i was really happy with that i did that,on the other hand personal research project was giving me so much headache i had no idea where to start from,well i did my research in first few weeks and then i left it till i handed in my client project as i was busy in editing entering 3D bars and all that well hard work but managed myself good.i handed in my work on Friday and today i ended my personal research project too and also sent it off to my supervisor so he could have look at it and tell me if i need to work on it more well i hope i don't have to but there is always something that comes up anyway. so lets see what happens when i receive his email.:{